Inverted Pyramid Writing

Inverted Pyramid Hard Story: A suspected clothing shoplifter was caught wearing layers of stolen goods from several stores in Stonestown Galleria on Wednesday,  September 6, 2017. Around 4pm, police say they arrested 22 year old Stefan Putzkammer. He was then fined and released for shoplifting. Due to the cold spell from Alaska, San Francisco was...

Revising News Headlines

Below, find examples of my revisions of several news headlines. September 6, 2017 Original: Officer in Utah blood nurse arrest fired from medic job http://www.bbc.com/news/world-us-canada-41179342 Revised: Utah officer fired for arresting uncooperative nurse   Original: US and South Korea must be seen to stand together https://www.ft.com/content/1bc06fe4-9178-11e7-a9e6-11d2f0ebb7f0 Revised: America and South Korea must unite for peace...